Tutor: So, shall we have a look at your presentation? Did you bring it with you?
Anne-Marie: I've got it here on a memory stick. Can we show you on your computer?
Tutor: Yes, that's fine. Let's have a look. Mmm Right, as you say, you’re going to add the advantages of using mobile phones to the first slide. Good. Who's going to explain the second slide with all the dangers?
Laila: That’s me. Do you think I've got enough detail?
Tutor: Yes. I think there’s plenty of information, but I think it’s all a bit mixed up at the moment. I mean, you've got dangers like getting headaches in the same list as having car accidents and being robbed in the street. They're all different types of danger, aren’t they? I think you should divide them into groups. Maybe under separate titles, like Health. Accidents and Security.
Laila: Oh, right. Yes, thank you. That'll make it much clearer to the audience Mmm.... OK
Tutor: Now, in the third slide you can put your suggestions for staying away from each of these dangers under separate titles.
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