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Checking

When you have finished writing your Task 1 answer, remember to check it. These are the important points to look for to get a good mark for task achievement:

Task Achievement
Does it have an overview of main patterns?
Does it have the most important details? ✘ Do not include these.
Does it have any irrelevant information (for example, personal experience or opinions)?
Does it quote numbers and other data accurately?


Activity 2.13

Check this example answer using the checklist.

The following tables compare the total value of exports and the amount of CO2 produced per person for five countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Sample answer:

The data shows that the country with the largest GDP (the USA) also had the highest perperson CO2 production. However, Japan and China, the countries with the second-largest GDPs, had the lowest per-person CO2 production.
Throughout the period (2000 to 201O). the USA had the highest GDP, rising steadily from $10 trillion to $14.62 trillion over the period, with only one small dip around 2009. This country also had the highest CO2 production per person in 2010. In contrast, Japan's GDP fluctuated around $5 trillion, with no major growth over the period, and although Japan's GDP was around 30 to 50 per cent of the USA's, its CO2 production was less than 10 per cent of the USA's.
The GDPs of Germany and France remained fairly constant over the period, only increasing by about $1 trillion, to $3.30 trillion and $2.55 trillion, respectively. Although their GDPs were similar, Germany's CO2 production was double that of France.
China's GDP was the same as France's until 2005, when it began to increase rapidly. By 2010, China's GDP was $5.74 trillion, although it still only produced 0.67 tonnes of CO2 per person.

Task achievement Yes/no Example
Does it give an overview of main patterns?
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yes

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Germany and France - GDP is similar. USA has highest GDP and highest CO2 per person.

Does it talk about the most important details?
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yes

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Describes all five countries. Describes changes in GDP.
Describes CO2 per person.

Does it have any irrelevant information (for example, personal experience or opinions)?
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no

Does it quote numbers and other data accurately?
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no

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The actual amounts of CO2 per person are not mentioned, except for one time.


TIP Another good way to check your answer is to ask a friend to read it and recreate the original diagram.

Activity 2.14

Draw the diagram that this answer is talking about.

The graph shows that CO2 levels increased steadily between 1960 and 2005, while average global temperatures also rose, but not as steeply and with some fluctuation. Despite a slow start at the beginning of the period, by the middle of the period, the temperature anomaly was rising fairly quickly, increasing by nearly 5°C in 20 years.

In 1960, CO2 levels were at around 310 ppmv, but they increased steadily by around 15 ppmv per decade. Halfway through the period, in 1980, they had reached 340 ppmv and by the end of the period, in 2005, they had risen to around 380 ppmv.
Meanwhile, the increase in average global temperature also increased between 1960 and 2005, though not so smoothly. For almost the first 20 years (1960 to 1978) there was no net increase, and the temperature difference remained under 0, with troughs of nearly -2°C in 1965 and 1976 and a small peak, at nearly -1°C, in 1971. From around 1978, the average temperature anomaly began to increase, with small peaks in 1982 (at 1°C). 1989 (at 2°C) and 2000 (at 4°CI. At the end of the period, the average temperature difference was 0.5°C.
Answer

Average global temperature (°C) and CO2 levels (ppmv).


When you use the practice answers at the back of this book, remember to check them with the checklist, and then ask a friend to recreate the diagram.


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