Activity 4.1
Here is a sample Task 2 and brainstorming for the task. Organise the ideas into an
essay plan, using the essay structure diagram.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Childhood obesity is increasing at rapid rates in developed countries.
What are some of the causes of this problem? What are some ways in which
childhood obesity rates can be reduced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Brainstorming
Causes of childhood obesity
- too much fast food
- too much time playing computer games
- not enough sport/ exercise
Ways to reduce childhood obesity
- parents cook meals, not buy takeaway
- limit time on computer
- more sport at and after school
Answer
Introduction:
Broad statement: Childhood obesity is rising all over the world ...
Thesis: Many causes and many ways to overcome ...
Body paragraph 1: Causes: too much fast food, too much time playing computer games,
not enough sport/exercise.
Example: ...
Body paragraph 2: Ways to reduce: parents cook meals not buy takeaway, limit time on
computers, more sport at and after school.
Example: ...
Conclusion:
Restate plus my opinion: big problem but can be overcome if parents
take action.
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