Practice Test 3
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Work is more important than leisure. Discuss and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Sample answer
In today·s busy world, the majority of people tend to work long hours, which can leave very
little time to spend with friends and family or to pursue hobbies. Some people feel that
making money and chasing career goals is more important than having sufficient leisure
time; however, I feel that both work and leisure should be of equal value.
Work is of importance in our lives for two reasons: firstly, and most obviously, we need
to work to earn an income, and secondly, work provides people with a sense of purpose.
Earning an income is the main reason most people go to work, and as we all need money
to eat, live and play, this does make work seem the higher priority. Furthermore, without a
reason to get out of bed everyday, we can feel somewhat lost and goalless, which in turn can
lead to emotional problems.
However, leisure is also of value in our lives. It is essential to have time to rest and
recuperate from the stresses of work - this helps keep us mentally and physically healthy.
Having free time to pursue hobbies or interests and to relax, laugh and play with our family
and friends also gives our life some meaning. Without this, we would not be well-balanced
people.
Overall, there is no doubt that work is important and without it we could not actually afford
to undertake leisure activities, however, in my opinion, a balance between both work and
leisure makes for a more contented and meaningful life.
[253 words]
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Task Response
This sample fully answers the question given in this task in that the writer has discussed
both aspects (work and leisure) and given their opinion. The ideas presented are extended
and supported.
Coherence and Cohesion
This sample flows well and the writer has successfully managed all aspects of coherence.
The paragraphing is good and the essay is organised. There is an overuse of the Linking
word 'however· - it would be better with some synonyms to give some variety to the cohesive
devices.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary used in this essay is accurate and there are no spelling errors. There is a high
level of academic vocabulary used and it is used well. Some phrases are a little informal,
such as 'chasing career goals' and 'get out of bed'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The grammar is accurate and a full range of structures typical of a native speaker are used.
Overall this essay would achieve an EXCELLENT band score and is extremely well written
with no grammar errors.
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