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Introduction

As with your grammar, the examiner wants to see that you have a good range of vocabulary and that you can use words appropriately. Here is part ofan answer to the following question:
All young people should be taught basic domestic skills such as cooking in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that all young people should be taught basic domestic skills such as cooking in school. I agree that all young people should be taught basic domestic skills. In this essay I will say why I agree.

What's wrong with this? The candidate has copied the words from the question exactly, and all of the other words used are very basic and repetitive. The candidate has not shown the examiner their range of vocabulary.
The candidate should have paraphrased the words and phrases from the question. For example:
  • Instead of all young people they could have written all schoolchildren or even each/every young person.
  • Instead of should be taught they could have written should/must/has to/ needs to learn/be educated in or even It is important/essential that [young people] learn.
  • Instead of basic domestic skills such as cooking they could have written fundamental household skills like how to cook.
- Practice activity 10.1: Using a range of vocabulary

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