07. Study the information about introductions in the box above, and then read the following Part 2 question and a student's introduction. What are the good and bad things about this introduction?

Online shopping has increased in popularity over the last few years. People now shop for a wide variety of items on websites. Other people still prefer going to the shops to buy things. There are a lot of reasons why online shopping is growing. One of them is that there is a wider choice of items. In this essay, I will consider each of these opinions and give my own view.

08. Check the notes below. Did you find the same points?