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Mindset for IELTS - Level 1 (Unit 05: Consumerism)


14. Complete the essay plan.


Model Answer

Many people now do most of their shopping online or in large supermarkets. Many small, family-run shops do not have enough customers to survive. Some people believe that this is going to happen more and more in the future. However, my view is that there will always be a place for smaller shops.

There are many disadvantages to shopping online. Sometimes you have to wait for delivery for several days and sometimes the goods are not what you want. I often have to return clothes and other items because the size or colour is wrong for me. Supermarkets, too, have their drawbacks. The goods are alt the same everywhere. For example, if you buy a coat from a supermarket, you will probably meet other people with exactly the same one.

Small, independent shops are more interesting places to shop. You can find unique items which other people will admire. I have a friend who collects antiques and he finds them in local shops, not supermarkets or websites. Some small shops specialise in one area, which is very useful. For instance, in music shops, the staff are very knowledgeable about music and instruments. You can get advice about what to buy. Finally, small, local shops give character to a town.

In my parents' village there are a few shops selling boating equipment, which suits the place as it is near the sea. I strongly believe that there will always be a place for small shops. However, the owners will need to make sure they sell different things from the supermarkets and keep their shops interesting.

PARAGRAPH 1: Introduction

Current situation
Opinion


PARAGRAPH 2

Main idea 1: There are disadvantages to shopping online
Supporting evidence: Wait for delivery, goods not what you want
Main idea 2: Supermarkets have drawbacks
Supporting evidence: a)


PARAGRAPH 3


Main idea 1: Small shops are interesting

Supporting evidence: b)

Main idea 2: Small shops specialise

Supporting evidence: c)

Main idea 3: d)

Supporting evidence: Boating equipment shops in parents' village near sea

PARAGRAPH 4: Conclusion

Briefly summarise your opinion


15. Find the following in the essay.

1. two expressions for giving opinions

2. two expressions for introducing examples

3. an expression to show it is the last point

4. two different future forms

5. two more linking expressions


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