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Mindset for IELTS - Level 2 (Unit 08: Festivals And Traditions)


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Celebrations such as New Year can make some people feel lonelier than usual. What are the reasons for this and how might this issue be tackled?


For those with family and friends close by, New Year can be a happy occasion. For many, however, for a whole variety of reasons, it can be a very lonely time and can make people feel more alone than usual. In the following essay, I the reasons for this and how the problem could be solved.

One of the reasons some people feel lonelier at New Year is because the event a great deal of attention by the media and many people feel pressure to be doing something spectacular. There is, therefore, a large expectation to be around crowds of people. Another reason is because at New Year many businesses for the holiday. Consequently, people often do not have the Option of keeping busy at work or socialising with colleagues. A third reason is that New Year tends to be a time when people think about the year which and their life in general. Therefore, if someone does not have company at this time, it can make them feel lonelier.

In order to tackle this problem. people should not pay too much attention to the media at this time. If they do not have anything plan ned. they should treat it as an ordinary day. If they to think about the year which has passed, they should it on a different day, when there is no pressure to feel happy.

In summary, loneliness can be a problem for some people at NewYear. In order to tackle this, the media should and lonely people should treat the date as an ordinary day.


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